Diary - Last night, I saw an ant moving food

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

Last night, I saw an ant moving food on the door and the food was his half size. I couldn't imagine if I needed to move a thing my half size and scaled up a door without any assistance. If all those insects became a human size, I believe they could beat us easily. Mosquitos could kill us by only one suck.

 

[teechar]

Last night, I saw an ant moving food half its size on the kitchen door. and the food was his half size.

The reason I added "kitchen" is because you used "the door".

I couldn't imagine how I could do it if I needed to move a thing my half my size and scaled to scale up a door without any assistance. If all those insects became human size, I believe they could beat/overwhelm us easily. Mosquitos could kill us by only one suck.

 

[Tarheel]

I don't think what mosquitos do is called sucking.

Insects have exoskeletons. They are built differently than us.

 

[emsr2d2]

Last night, I saw an ant moving carrying/dragging a piece of food half its size on the up a door. and the food was his half size. I'm sure I couldn't imagine if I needed to move a thing carry/drag something half my half size and scaled up a door* without any assistance. If all those insects** became a (no article here) human-size, I believe they could beat [really] hurt us. easily. Mosquitos A mosquito, for example, could kill us by with only one suck bite.

*It's odd to even try to imagine, as a human, carrying something vertically up a door. It doesn't matter what size the thing is, you're not Spiderman so you can't walk vertically up a door!

** All what insects? You've only mentioned ants up to this point.

 

[Maybo]

*It's odd to even try to imagine, as a human, carrying something vertically up a door. It doesn't matter what size the thing is, you're not Spiderman so you can't walk vertically up a door!

At that moment, I really thought about that.

** All what insects? You've only mentioned ants up to this point.

I was thinking about all insects in the world.

 

[emsr2d2]

At that moment, I really thought about that.

At what moment? As you were writing it? In that case, you still had time to change it. If you meant "Just as I read your response, I thought about that", then that's what you need to say.

I was thinking about all the insects in the world.

In that case, you should have said "If all the insects in the world, ...". Using "these" was wrong.

 

[Maybo]

At what moment? As you were writing it? In that case, you still had time to change it. If you meant "Just as I read your response, I thought about that", then that's what you need to say.

I meant when I saw the ant, I was thinking If I were the ant but as a human.