My lovely Sunday had starting at 8 a.m,

[TruongStuckinTrunk]

Hello everyone, my name is Truong also an English learner. Can you please correct this short writting for me? Thank you so much.

My lovely sunday had starting at 8 a.m, but actually I woke up at 5.30 a.m. Lying on a bed with laziness, I did not have a thing to do, so I decided to spend time with social media. At first I was allowing myself to used a phone untill 7 a.m and then I could wake up to did other stuffs. However, I did not pay any attention how was the time flew so fast. When I came to myself, a clock was at 8 a.m. After that I did try to get up but all my body's parts felt exhausted because I had spent temporary time for lied on bed just scrolling screen. At that moment I had felt guilty for that reason. However those feeling just kept me up for briefly, as well as it was becoming normally to me.

 

[Tarheel]

I'm not sure what you mean by the first sentence. Do you mean you woke up at 5:30, but you didn't get out of bed until 8:00?

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello everyone. My name is Truong also and I am an English learner. Can you please correct this short piece of writing for me? Thank you so much.

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My lovely Sunday had starting at 8 a.m., but actually I woke up at 5.30 a.m.

I have the same query as Tarheel. I don't know what you mean by this.

I was lying lazily on a in bed with laziness, and I did not have a thing to do, so I decided to spend time with on social media.

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At first, I was allowing myself had planned to used a use my/spend time on my phone untill until 7 a.m. and then I could wake was going to get up to did do other stuffs stuff.

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However, I did not pay any attention to the time how was the time and it flew by so very fast.

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When I came to myself, a clock was at Suddenly, I realised it was 8 a.m.

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After that, I did try to get up but all my body's parts felt my whole body was exhausted because I had spent temporary time for lied lying on in bed just scrolling screen on my phone.

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At that moment I had I felt guilty. for that reason.

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However, those feeling just kept me up for I felt that way only briefly, as well as it was becoming normally to me.

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[TruongStuckinTrunk]

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I have the same query as Tarheel. I don't know what you mean by this.

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I have the same query as Tarheel. I don't know what you mean by this.

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Note my corrections above. I have no idea what you mean by the underlined part.

I'm not sure what you mean by the first sentence. Do you mean you woke up at 5:30, but you didn't get out of bed until 8:00?

Hello,Tarheel. Yes, that is what I mean. Thank for corrected me.

 

[TruongStuckinTrunk]

I have no idea what you mean by the underlined part.

Thanks for pointing that out. For the underlined part, I had trying to say that I did'nt feel guilty after couple of mins.

 

[Tarheel]

Hello,Tarheel. Yes, that is what I mean. Thank for HELPING me.

You might want to rewrite it now, keeping in mind the corrections/suggestions.

 

[TruongStuckinTrunk]

You might want to rewrite it now, keeping in mind the corrections/suggestions.

Yes, thank you so much

 

[emsr2d2]

Thanks for pointing that out. For the underlined part, I had was trying to say that I did'nt didn't feel guilty after a couple of mins minutes.

In that case, you simply needed to say "However, I felt that way for only a couple of minutes".

 

[emsr2d2]

Yes. Thank you so much.

Remember to end every sentence with an appropriate punctuation mark. Also note that there's no need to write a new post to thank anyone. Simply add the "Thanks" icon to any response you find helpful. It saves time for everyone.

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello, space after a comma Tarheel. Yes, that is what I mean. Thank you for corrected correcting me.

 

[TruongStuckinTrunk]

In that case, you simply needed to say "However, I felt that way for only a couple of minutes".

I see. I will rewrite that.