ok guys ,here is my poem i need u to tell me ur opinion frankly;-)
Don't Quit
when things go wrong as they sometimes will
when the road you're truding seems all uphill
when the funds are low and the debts are high
And you want to smile,but you have to sigh
when care is pressing you down abit
Rest if you must,but don't you quit
Life is queer with its twists and turns
As everyone of us sometimes learns
Don't give up though the pace seems slow
You may succeed with another blow
Often the struggler has given up
when he might have captured the victor's cup
And he learned too late when night csme down
how close he was to the golden crown
success is failure turned inside out
So stick to the fight when you're hardest hit
it's when things seems worst that
You mustn't quit