rainous
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- Galician
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- Armenia
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Can anyone help me check to see if there are any grammatical errors or awkward sounding phrases or expressions in this sentence which I wrote myself.
I would appreciate any help I can get.
"We are not the creatures that conform to the way of animal kingdom reacting only to the prey clearly visible in front of our eyes, but rather ones that react to the invisible dream in which we can stretch the imagination to its very end by picturing it in our heads."
Thank you.
I would appreciate any help I can get.
"We are not the creatures that conform to the way of animal kingdom reacting only to the prey clearly visible in front of our eyes, but rather ones that react to the invisible dream in which we can stretch the imagination to its very end by picturing it in our heads."
Thank you.
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