Anna232
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- Joined
- Mar 17, 2024
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- Teacher (Other)
- Native Language
- Georgian
- Home Country
- Georgia
- Current Location
- Georgia
I am sharing my opinion about a popular idea here that having single employees is better than married ones. Do the parts marked by asterics sound idiomatic? I don't think "contact" works when talking about lifestyles. I wrote in brackets better versions.
Our life is divided into two parts: at home with our family and at work. If we spend more time at work these lifestyles *should be separated*, and *they should not contact with each other or influence each other.* ( If we spend more time at work a clear distinction should be made between both.) *In opposite situations* ( There are situations when) you come home *with a bad( in a bad mood) mood* and because of that you may insult your family members. *Answering the question*, (having said that) all situations are different. When you are young this is an advantage, but *with ages* (as you grow older/ with time, over time) it is a disadvantage.
Our life is divided into two parts: at home with our family and at work. If we spend more time at work these lifestyles *should be separated*, and *they should not contact with each other or influence each other.* ( If we spend more time at work a clear distinction should be made between both.) *In opposite situations* ( There are situations when) you come home *with a bad( in a bad mood) mood* and because of that you may insult your family members. *Answering the question*, (having said that) all situations are different. When you are young this is an advantage, but *with ages* (as you grow older/ with time, over time) it is a disadvantage.