It is an awesome and overwhelming feeling of appreciation to be able to witness the..

[kohyoongliat]

It is an awesome and overwhelming feeling of appreciation to be able to witness the Grand Ceremony

commemorating the completion of the major renovation of the church.

I can truly feel the passion of the pastor to rebuild the church.

Are the above sentences fine/natural?

Thanks.

 

[Rover_KE]

It's all in bold. Please use the Edit Post feature to amend it.

 

[kohyoongliat]

It's all in bold. Please use the Edit Post feature to amend it.

Done, Rover.

 

[kohyoongliat]

Could somebody please comment on my post? Thanks.

 

[Rover_KE]

Your sentences are grammatically correct but I wouldn't call them natural. They're wordy and the language is rather florid.

 

[MikeNewYork]

It is an awesome and overwhelming feeling of appreciation to be able to witness the Grand Ceremony

commemorating the completion of the major renovation of the church.

I can truly feel the passion of the pastor to rebuild the church.

Are the above sentences fine/natural?

Thanks.

For your first sentence, I suggest breaking it into two sentences. "To be able to do something" is not a feeling.

Assuming you want this to be in the present tense:


I sincerely appreciate being able to witness the Grand Ceremony commemorating the completion of the major renovation of the church. It is an awesome and overwhelming experience.

Your second sentence is fine.