Your incompleteness of full stops is....

[Silverobama]

A friend of mine has a weakness. When he writes English, either in paper or online, he doesn't use full stops. I've told him many times and I really can't stand that. Today I saw the sentences he wrote and I said this again:

Your incompleteness of full stops in sentences worsens my obsessive-compulsive disorder.

I don't thin the italic sentence is natural. How would you say that?

 

[tedmc]

He could not have written "sentences" as you called them, if he hadn't used full-stops.

 

[teechar]

Your incompleteness of full stops in sentences worsens my obsessive-compulsive disorder.
I don't think the italic sentence is natural.

You're right. It's useless. First, leave your OCD out of it, and second, simplify your phrasing. Post below.

 

[Silverobama]

You're right. It's useless. First, leave your OCD out of it, and second, simplify your phrasing. Post below.

Much appreciated. How about:

The incompleteness of the full stops in your sentences really gives me a hard time.

 

[teechar]

No. Do not use "incompleteness" in that sentence. It doesn't fit. Try:
"Please get into the habit of using full stops. They clearly separate your sentences, and make your text grammatical and easier to read".

 

[emsr2d2]

Alternatively, you can say "The lack of full stops in your writing makes it really hard to read". As teechar said, "incompleteness" is not appropriate here at all.