[Grammar] You can't show this video to Kevin!

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


-You can't show this video to Kevin! If he sees it, he will never forgive me.


-Ok. Kevin will never know about this video… if you help me


Thanks.

 

[emsr2d2]

The first line specifically demands that Kevin never see the video. The reply only mentions his knowing about it. They're not quite the same. I would make the idea agree in the two sentences.

It's "OK" or "Okay" at the start of a sentence, but not "Ok".
You need a space before the ellipsis.
You need a full stop after "help me".