Yesterday read was absolutely astonishing

[sspin86]

Yesterday read was absolutely astonishing and informative lecture. HE abandoned people to chase or hunt the fish on Saturday for the sake of worship and mention as one of the supreme order. Initially, for some time, people followed the order and avoided fish hunt on Saturday. Slowly and gradually they observed that on the day of Saturday, fishes are floating in large quantity and this made them greedy so Instead of direct hunting on Saturday, they pleaded and sapped near river and ocean. This way fishes collects in that dug space and next day they collect all the fishes. Basically they chose this indirect way of hunting which unfavorable and become the cause of their devastation. All time danger catastrophe hit all the people and convert their faces into the face of monkey.

Above article is for practice to achieve next level of english writing. Please feel free to comment for any mistake in language. Thanks

 

[emsr2d2]

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

I'm afraid I don't understand any of it. Some of it looks as if it is the result of text being put into Google Translate. Let's start with the first sentence:

Yesterday read was absolutely astonishing and informative lecture.


​The part I have underlined doesn't make sense. Can you explain it in a different way?

 

[Tdol]

Yesterday's reading? It does appear to have a religious context.

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

It sounds like a Dr. Bronner's bottle. Sspin, tell us more about what you're trying to say in your essay.