AlexWoodz
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This is my practice #2. Please correct as much as you can. I have a feeling that everything I have written down below sounds weird/unnatural. Despite that, I have to keep trying.
Do athletes make too much money? (I got the question from a random page)
It's a controversial question. Lots of people might say that they make too much money, others not enough.
Do you know how much money do athletes make? They earn millions of dollars every year, even more.
In my opinion, when comparing the income of athletes with professions that are also important, such as doctors, teachers, or firefighters, seems extremely unfair.
I guess It's because athletes are constantly exercising to stay in shape in order to give a good performance, It may even seem like a good reason of why they make too much money, but even so, I still think It's not fair.
Even though I love baseball, soccer and all sports, the amounts of money seem wild to me.
Here is my conclusion:
It's fair until I compare it to another profession, then It's not fair.
Do athletes make too much money? (I got the question from a random page)
It's a controversial question. Lots of people might say that they make too much money, others not enough.
Do you know how much money do athletes make? They earn millions of dollars every year, even more.
In my opinion, when comparing the income of athletes with professions that are also important, such as doctors, teachers, or firefighters, seems extremely unfair.
I guess It's because athletes are constantly exercising to stay in shape in order to give a good performance, It may even seem like a good reason of why they make too much money, but even so, I still think It's not fair.
Even though I love baseball, soccer and all sports, the amounts of money seem wild to me.
Here is my conclusion:
It's fair until I compare it to another profession, then It's not fair.