That's odd. Here are the changes in post #10:
[STRIKE]Hi Karen,[/STRIKE]
I have made some tweaks to the draft of my email to be more professional and to be acceptable to the CEO.
I really appreciate your help in editing it.
"I [STRIKE]was and[/STRIKE] am [STRIKE]still[/STRIKE] grateful for your enthusiasm for me as a candidate[STRIKE], in treating my application, and in each of[/STRIKE] and for your positive replies to my [STRIKE]follow up[/STRIKE] e-mails. [STRIKE]This something I appreciate and I wish to be exist until you have me on board.[/STRIKE]
Don't assume you'll get the job. That would make you sound like you're not listening.
I [STRIKE]am with HR that[/STRIKE] know that locals have the highest priority, but since you mentioned that you plan to beef the team up[STRIKE], and since you postponed your decision in my application until you[/STRIKE] and see what [STRIKE]will[/STRIKE] happens over the next few weeks, I apprediate your keeping me in mind.[STRIKE]believe that your decision and ongoing support are still needed to align with HR to get an exception for me to join the team as an expat."[/STRIKE]