alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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The villa they rented overlooked the pier. Jane looked out the window, finding a coffee shop there. A soft music drifted from the almost empty place. Putting on her jacket, she descended the stairs and strode towards the cafe. The sky was overcast, but the moon occasionally broke through the clouds, casting the pier with a silvery glow.
The villa they rented overlooked the pier. Jane looked out the window, finding a coffee shop there. A soft music drifted from the almost empty place. Putting on her jacket, she descended the stairs and strode towards the cafe. The sky was overcast, but the moon occasionally broke through the clouds, casting the pier with a silvery glow.