alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Hello.
Are these sentences I have written correct and natural? Which version do you like better?
This is a cruel city. The only instinct that survives after living in this city is the survival instinct.
The only instinct that survives after living in this city is the survival instinct. This city obliterates all your other instincts.
Do you have suggestions to make them better?
Are these sentences I have written correct and natural? Which version do you like better?
This is a cruel city. The only instinct that survives after living in this city is the survival instinct.
The only instinct that survives after living in this city is the survival instinct. This city obliterates all your other instincts.
Do you have suggestions to make them better?