Sentence Improvement

[Andrew Awence]

The challenge of the Job is that it's tiring.

Hey guys, being a tutor who always tries to uphold the highest standard in lesson delivery. I find the above sentence not really natural despite being grammatically correct.

I would like to suggest the following to my kids. What do you think?

1. The job can be tiring when there are lots of customers.

2. The job can be tiring sometimes.

Any better suggestions? Thanks

 

[Tarheel]

The challenge of the Job is that it's tiring.

Hey guys, being a tutor who always tries to uphold the highest standard in lesson delivery. I find the above sentence not really natural despite being grammatically correct.

I would like to suggest the following to my kids. What do you think?

1. The job can be tiring when there are lots of customers.

2. The job can be tiring sometimes.

Any better suggestions? [.....]

Two questions. Where did you see the original sentence? Why don't you think it's natural?

 

[teechar]

Hello, and welcome to the forum.

Hey guys, Being a tutor who always tries to uphold the highest standard in lesson delivery, I find the above sentence not really natural despite it being grammatically correct.

See above.

I would like to suggest the following to my kids.

Your kids?! Are you helping someone with their homework?