Regarding SAS workshop

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Hi Paul,

Regarding SAS workshop at Deakin Burwood campus (we talked about it before), it will be from 10 to 14 August. It is free but it's only for Deakin staff. However, I can arrange it for you to attend this (of course for free) if you are still interested in it. It's good to know that such a workshop worth almost 5000 AU$ in other occasions.


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