Harry Yang
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- Joined
- Aug 20, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
- Current Location
- South Korea
Hi, Good day!
I write a draft for practice and I think something is not smooth with my draft.
Would you tell me about my mistakes?, I will be very appreciated.
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Recently the company sent our team the brand new prototype products. At first, the team received the products, we were so happy and proud of our job and the company because being the early adopter is pretty big satisfaction.
However a few days later the team's mood was getting so seriously down and drowning with big depression.
A reason why the team in deep despair, the prototype product we received, that showed us a fault and that error was so critical issue.
If the issue would not be fixed before the release date, the recall could be the only option for the future.
My team reported the issued problem as soon as possible but on one hand, our new product is just about to release to the retailers. We are anxious every day for fast resolution with a great concern about the future.
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Thanks!
I write a draft for practice and I think something is not smooth with my draft.
Would you tell me about my mistakes?, I will be very appreciated.
---------------------------------------------------------
Recently the company sent our team the brand new prototype products. At first, the team received the products, we were so happy and proud of our job and the company because being the early adopter is pretty big satisfaction.
However a few days later the team's mood was getting so seriously down and drowning with big depression.
A reason why the team in deep despair, the prototype product we received, that showed us a fault and that error was so critical issue.
If the issue would not be fixed before the release date, the recall could be the only option for the future.
My team reported the issued problem as soon as possible but on one hand, our new product is just about to release to the retailers. We are anxious every day for fast resolution with a great concern about the future.
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Thanks!
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