keannu
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- Dec 27, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
- Current Location
- South Korea
My favorite time of the day
Let me introduce my favorite time of the day.
It’s the evening.
In the evening, first I have dinner with my family.
Then, I play with my younger sister.
We play together (like) doing hide and seek, playing a board game, or drawing.
1.Especially, both she and I like drawing with iPAD.
2.Both she and I especially like drawing with iPAD.
3.More than anything else/above all, Both she and I like drawing with iPAD.
I show her what I drew.
Then, I explain to her how I drew.
After playing with her, I usually play computer games.
I’m happiest when I play them/computer games.
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1. Does (like) have to be removed or does it work?
2. Which is the best among 1, 2, and 3?
3. Does it have to be "them"? Or does it sound natural?
Or if you have some parts wrong, please correct them.
Let me introduce my favorite time of the day.
It’s the evening.
In the evening, first I have dinner with my family.
Then, I play with my younger sister.
We play together (like) doing hide and seek, playing a board game, or drawing.
1.Especially, both she and I like drawing with iPAD.
2.Both she and I especially like drawing with iPAD.
3.More than anything else/above all, Both she and I like drawing with iPAD.
I show her what I drew.
Then, I explain to her how I drew.
After playing with her, I usually play computer games.
I’m happiest when I play them/computer games.
=====================================
1. Does (like) have to be removed or does it work?
2. Which is the best among 1, 2, and 3?
3. Does it have to be "them"? Or does it sound natural?
Or if you have some parts wrong, please correct them.
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