[Grammar] Increase (The Number Of)

[NancyAr]

"She had many opportunities to increase the number of her contacts while traveling in different countries in Europe."

Is "the number of" redundant?

 

[5jj]

No.

 

[NancyAr]

"Proponents of the bills contend that doctors tend to increase referrals to medical services in which they have a financial interest, thereby driving up medical costs"

According to the answer to first post, would "the number of" be necessary between "increase" and "referrals"?

 

[White Hat]

"the number of" is correct; it's like saying "the amount of".

 

[5jj]

"Proponents of the bills contend that doctors tend to increase referrals to medical services in which they have a financial interest, thereby driving up medical costs"

According to the answer to first post, would "the number of" be necessary between "increase" and "referrals"?

Clearly not, as the speaker/writer did not use it.

 

[NancyAr]

It appears that "the number of" is randomly used without rules.

 

[NancyAr]

How do I know when to put "the number of" in the "increase ____ (some count noun)" clause?

 

[White Hat]

How do I know when to put "the number of" in the "increase ____ (some count noun)" clause?

You will use "the number of" with countable nouns in the plural.
You cannot increase referrals. But you can increase their number. That's why.

 

[NancyAr]

Then, "increase referrals" is grammatically wrong?

 

[5jj]

Then, "increase referrals" is grammatically wrong?

It's not a matter of being grammatically wrong; it's more a matter of style. There are those who agree with Bennevis, "You cannot increase referrals. But you can increase their number". On the other hand, there are over 400 citations in the Google Books Corpus.

If you want to please the purists, use 'number'; however, if you don't, you'll be in good company.

 

[White Hat]

Then, "increase referrals" is grammatically wrong?

Not grammatically - semantically.

 

[NancyAr]

What is the complete web address for Google Books Corpus?

 

[5jj]

What is the complete web address for Google Books Corpus?

Have you you thought about googling "Google Books Corpus"?

 

[NancyAr]

Is Google Books Corpus a school? It gives some ending in ".edu".

 

[5jj]

Is Google Books Corpus a school? It gives some ending in ".edu".

Read what it says there!

"This new interface for Google Books allows you to search more than 155 billion (155,000,000,000) words in more than 1.3 million books of American English from 1810-2009 (including 62 billion words from 1980-2009). Although this "corpus" is based on Google Books data, it is not an official product of Google or Google Books (citation), but rather it was created by Mark Davies, Professor of Linguistics at Brigham Young University, and it is related to other large corpora that we have created."