keannu
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- Dec 27, 2010
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- Korean
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- South Korea
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- South Korea
"I'll take care of you during the scary night" would be much better.
"Color/colors" is repeated four times in your second sentence. I'm sure you can do something about that yourself.
Hmm, if you have to hit it to make it change colour, I wouldn't say it has changing colours. That sounds as if it does that all the time.
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