felt relieved and a sense of

[navi tasan]

Is this sentence correct:
1-She felt relieved and a sense of peace.

I don't like it. I think some native speakers use sentences like this, but it seems to me that the sentence has a problem. "Relieved" is an adjective and "a sense of peace" is a noun. It is a bit like saying: She left the room in a wheelchair and in a flood of tears.


Gratefully,
Navi.

 

[Raymott]

Is this sentence correct:
1-She felt relieved and a sense of peace.

I don't like it. I think some native speakers use sentences like this, but it seems to me that the sentence has a problem. "Relieved" is an adjective and "a sense of peace" is a noun. It is a bit like saying: She left the room in a wheelchair and in a flood of tears.


Gratefully,
Navi.

I don't like it much either, for the reason you mention. But it's nowhere near as bad as the other example.
How about, "She felt relieved, and a sense of peace came over her."

 

[billmcd]

Is this sentence correct:
1-She felt relieved and a sense of peace.

I don't like it. I think some native speakers use sentences like this, but it seems to me that the sentence has a problem. "Relieved" is an adjective and "a sense of peace" is a noun. It is a bit like saying: She left the room in a wheelchair and in a flood of tears.


Gratefully,
Navi.

How about, "She felt relief and a sense of peace".

 

[MikeNewYork]

Is this sentence correct:
1-She felt relieved and a sense of peace.

I don't like it. I think some native speakers use sentences like this, but it seems to me that the sentence has a problem. "Relieved" is an adjective and "a sense of peace" is a noun. It is a bit like saying: She left the room in a wheelchair and in a flood of tears.


Gratefully,
Navi.

I agree with Bill's modification.