White Hat
Banned
- Joined
- Aug 14, 2011
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Russian Federation
- Current Location
- Russian Federation
Your version:
"Taking part in the press-conference, dedicated to the current economic situation, were media representatives who discussed further development of the State."
It doesn't sound natural and it doesn't sound like a sentence you would normally start a news report with.
My version:
"Media representatives took part in discussion of further economic development today at a press conference dedicated to the current economic situation."
This is clean and meaningful.
I'd like to see what native speakers have to say on this.
"Taking part in the press-conference, dedicated to the current economic situation, were media representatives who discussed further development of the State."
It doesn't sound natural and it doesn't sound like a sentence you would normally start a news report with.
My version:
"Media representatives took part in discussion of further economic development today at a press conference dedicated to the current economic situation."
This is clean and meaningful.
I'd like to see what native speakers have to say on this.
