NewHopeR
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- Nov 6, 2009
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Am I on the right track?
Context:
Xi Jinping is regarded as more self-confident and gregarious than President Hu Jintao, the famously stiff leader he is on track to succeed next year in a highly choreographed transition that includes, as a major step, this week’s visit.
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China’s president-in-waiting heads to Washington for a visit crucial to both nations - The Washington Post
Am I on the right track?
Context:
Xi Jinping is regarded as more self-confident and gregarious than President Hu Jintao, the famously stiff leader he is on track to succeed next year in a highly choreographed transition that includes, as a major step, this week’s visit.
More:
China’s president-in-waiting heads to Washington for a visit crucial to both nations - The Washington Post