Diary-Recently, I’m growing a venus trap.

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Maybo

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This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

Recently, I’m growing a venus trap. It looks like a man-eating plant. Yesterday I watched a show about living things in the ancient. It said many years ago, oxygen level was higher so animals and plants were a lot more giant. That make me think that if we give venus traps more oxygen, it might grow bigger than human and become a real man-eating plant!
 
Recently, I’m I've been growing a venus fly trap. It looks like a man-eating plant. Yesterday, I watched a show about living things in the ancient times. It said that, many years ago, the oxygen level was higher so animals and plants were a lot more giant bigger/larger. That makes me think that if we give venus fly traps more oxygen, it they might grow bigger than a human and become a real man-eating plants!
See above. You really need to work on your singular/plural noun/verb agreement.
 
@Maybo Has your Venus fly trap caught any bugs?
 
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