Diary - My mum and brother have been convincing me

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

My mum and brother have been convincing me to learn driving. My mum thinks that if I knew how to drive, we could live in the rural area. I don't want to because I'm worried that I would get hit by other cars. I don't think I have quick reactions to those kind of accidents. At first, I was strong-minded but, later, I've changed my mind. Even though I don't like to drive but if I were in a car and the car driver passed out, at least I would be able to drive the car to safety.

 

[teechar]

My mum and brother have been convincing trying to convince me to [ 1] learn take driving lessons. My mum thinks that if I knew how to drive, we could live in the countryside. rural area. I don't want to because I'm worried that I would get hit by other cars. I don't think I have quick reactions to those kind of and may have an accident.

See above.
[ 1]: Alternatively, you can say "... to learn to drive".

At first, I was strong-minded but, later, I've changed my mind. Even though I don't like to drive but if I were in a car and the car driver passed out, at least I would be able to drive the car to safety.

That's not well written. Reword it.

 

[Maybo]

At first, I was strong-minded but, later, I've changed my mind because an advantage of knowing how to drive occurred to me. If I were in a car and the car driver passed out, at least I would be able to drive the car to safety.