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I wouldn't use "barely" there. You could use "just".
Honestly - I don't recommend trying to add two more things to that description. You're going to end up with a long, awkward sentence.
Alright then. I will need two sentences. How about this?
The half-moon was peeping through a chink in the clouds, just over the mountain peak. The scattered clouds danced gently around the star-studded sky.