Silverobama
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Please help me to make the folllowing essay natural, colloquial and grammatical.
Last year I stayed in a hotel in the mountains for two days and I can't really forget it. It doesn't have grandiose decor or attractive entrance but it does provide good services. It was designed by a creative architect who successfully combined its characteristics with the weather conditions in the mountains: it's neither hot in summer nor cold in winter. The exterior of it looks like a normal buildings but inside with many facilities which caters almost all the needs of the tourists. The bathroom was equipped with the state-of-the-art tub and the beds are extremely comfortable. Last but not least, the owner always gives discounts to visitors from far-away places.
Last year I stayed in a hotel in the mountains for two days and I can't really forget it. It doesn't have grandiose decor or attractive entrance but it does provide good services. It was designed by a creative architect who successfully combined its characteristics with the weather conditions in the mountains: it's neither hot in summer nor cold in winter. The exterior of it looks like a normal buildings but inside with many facilities which caters almost all the needs of the tourists. The bathroom was equipped with the state-of-the-art tub and the beds are extremely comfortable. Last but not least, the owner always gives discounts to visitors from far-away places.
