Silverobama
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The following short paragraph was written by me to express the idea that when in 2005, the technology wasn't as advanced as it is today. We used old-fashioned softwares to chat with friends online. But I do miss/love those good old days because it always brings back good memories betwee us when I think of it. Please help me to correct the following sentences:
Back to 2005, we didn't use WeChat * and we didn't have Wifi service either. But I really miss/love those good times/days chatting with each other online because it always brings back warm memories between me and my friends of that time.
*: WeChat is a kind of apps which became popular in recent 10 years.
I think the underlined word can be deleted. I don't know which word to choose. Also, Is the paragraph coeherent?
Back to 2005, we didn't use WeChat * and we didn't have Wifi service either. But I really miss/love those good times/days chatting with each other online because it always brings back warm memories between me and my friends of that time.
*: WeChat is a kind of apps which became popular in recent 10 years.
I think the underlined word can be deleted. I don't know which word to choose. Also, Is the paragraph coeherent?