At the hospital the queue to get your prescription card dated was too long.

[tufguy]

At the hospital the queue to get your prescription card dated was too long. I was in the queue and halfway through the queue there was a wall. Queue had a curve at the wall. It seemed it ended there but it was just the half part of the queue until that wall.

Please check my sentences.

 

[Tdol]

It's a bit of a mess- you're mixing up basic pronouns, so it's not clear whether you mean you or I. There are also articles missing. And there may be cultural issues- I have not heard of getting prescription cards dated.

 

[tufguy]

At the hospital the queue to get the prescription-cum-appointment card dated (they date-stamp it as an evidence and for records as well) was too long. I was in the queue and halfway through the queue there was a wall. Queue had a curve at the wall. It seemed it ended there but it was just the half part of the queue until that wall.

 

[emsr2d2]

At the hospital​, the queue to get the prescription-cum-appointment card dated (they date-stamp it as [STRIKE]an[/STRIKE] evidence and for their records [STRIKE]as well[/STRIKE]) was too long.

I was in the queue and halfway through the queue there was a wall. (That sounds as if they built a wall at the halfway point of the queue!)

The queue [STRIKE]had a[/STRIKE] curved/turned at​/round the wall.

[STRIKE]It seemed it ended there but it was just the half part of the queue until that wall.[/STRIKE]
It looked like the queue ended at the wall but it continued the other side of the wall.

See above.

 

[tufguy]

I was in the queue and halfway through the queue there was a wall.

(That sounds as if they built a wall at the halfway point of the queue!).

Could you please tell me the correct way to say it?

The q

ueue had a curved/turned at​/round the wall.

It means "the queue turned at the wall or curved round the wall". Is it correct?