Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down

[Gaya87]

If there are any grammatical mistakes, please let me know. Thank you.

Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down the notorious Criminal Lord and a casino owner but, they have to face obstacles in order to catch the thug.

Agent 8 disguises as a Comic or Stand Up Comedian to find a comic who can link them to the Criminal Master named The King, the spectacular King of Gamble and a casino owner in Asia. To find and catch The King, they have to go through loads of obstacles, from tracking down by the Interpol and police for the bank robbery in the mission before, to confront all groups of thugs making their mission hard to accomplish.

 

[tedmc]

Agent 8 goes on a mission to take down the notorious Criminal Lord and a casino owner but, they have to face obstacles in order to catch the thug.

Agent 8 disguises as a comic or stand-up comedian to find a comic who can link them to the Criminal Master named The King, the spectacular King of Gamble and a casino owner in Asia. To find and catch The King, they have to go through loads of obstacles, from tracking down by the Interpol and police for the bank robbery in the mission before, to confront all groups of thugs making their mission hard to accomplish.

 

[emsr2d2]

There is no need for a comma after "but".

 

[teechar]

Is Agent 8 an individual or a team of individuals?

 

[konungursvia]

There is no need for a comma after "but".

I would put one before but though.

 

[Gaya87]

Is Agent 8 an individual or a team of individuals?

Agent 8 is the group name. 8 members in a group, Teechar.

 

[MikeNewYork]

How can a group of 8 disguise (themselves) as a comic?