A Indian Movie, shadi ki samasya

[Gaya87]

Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Kristy, a successful TV producer and Jake, a young food entrepreneur, embark on their romantic honeymoon in Italy. But as soon as they arrive in Shiraz, both encounter a series of unfortunate events beyond their control. It is during their honeymoon their fairytale romance starts to crack as the meaning of marriage puts their relationship to the test. Will they survive each other and come home with their marriage intact?

Short summary
Jake and Kristy are newlyweds couple who decided to go to Italy for their honeymoon. But soon their fairytale romance starts to crack as the meaning of marriage puts their relationship to the test.

 

[tedmc]

Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Kristy, a successful TV producer, and Jake, a young food entrepreneur, embark on their romantic honeymoon in Italy. But as soon as they arrive in Shiraz, both encounter a series of unfortunate events beyond their control. It is during their honeymoon their fairytale romance starts to crack as the meaning of marriage puts their relationship to the test. Will they [STRIKE]survive[/STRIKE] get along with each other and come home with their marriage intact?

Short summary
Jake and Kristy are a newlywed[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] couple who decided to go to Italy for their honeymoon. But soon their fairytale romance starts to crack as the meaning of marriage puts their relationship to the test.

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[Gaya87]

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Can I say:A young newlywed couple, Jake and Kristy decide to go to Italy for their honeymoon. What do you think?

 

[tedmc]

Can I say:A young newlywed couple, Jake and Kristy decide to go to Italy for their honeymoon. What do you think?

Yes, this is better.

 

[emsr2d2]

A young newlywed couple, Jake and Kristy, decide to go to Italy for their honeymoon.

Note the additional comma above.