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[Emmett1]

Hello everyone,
I hope this the section.
Can someone check the email and tell me and most important fix spaces between them. Thanks in advance.

Dear xxx..

This is Emmett from xxx and I contact you to introduce our latest xxx.

xxx been in the industry for over 7 years and already generated value to companies by:

• Deprecation of 32-bitS.
• Deteriorating support and testing for X-forwarding.
• Software/library version incompatibility.

Our website is xxx incase you would like to learn more about us and our last products.

Feel free to reach out to me for further information.

Kind regards,
xxx

 

[teechar]

Hi Emmett1,
Are you really a native speaker of German living in Canada?
If not, then please edit your profile page and provide the correct information.

 

[probus]

Don't write "incase". It's two words.

I don't think software or software engineers normally deprecate anything. Look up "deprecate" in a dictionary. Also 'deteriorating support" seems very unlikely to be what you mean to say.

Simple words are almost always best.