earns a substantially more amount of money than anybody on a pension.

[HanibalII]

I know this is an awkward sentence, but is it at all grammatically incorrect?

"earns a substantially more amount of money than anybody on a pension."


Cheers

 

[Chicken Sandwich]

NOT A TEACHER

It sounds awkward to me and there is no subject. I'd write, "Bob earns substantially more money than anybody on a pension".

 

[MartinEnglish]

It's wrong because you can't have "a more amount"
If you're making a comparative sentence you could have
He earns substantially more (than anybody on a pension)
or
He earns a substantially higher amount (than anybody on a pension).

 

[HanibalII]

It's wrong because you can't have "a more amount"
If you're making a comparative sentence you could have
He earns substantially more (than anybody on a pension)
or
He earns a substantially higher amount (than anybody on a pension).

Cheers. Thought as much. It had me stumped.

I was going to have it re-written as "he earns a substantially larger amount than".

So it can't be written as "more amount", but could be written as "larger amount"?