You have just finished a three-week study…

[laluuuusii]

STUDYING ENGLISH OVERSEAS

This report aims foremostly to assess my personal experience as a student being part of a programme. It was organised for us to both enter a workforce temporarily and develop our English skills.

OVERALL OPINION
At no time had I expected the course to have such a noticeable impact on my life. Not only have I increased my fluency and boosted my confidence while speaking the language, but i have had the opportunity to leave my comfort zone into the bargain.
From daybreak to day’s end I was productively learning: I attended classes until noon and displayed an administrative role in a local library.

SALIENT POINTS TO BE HIGHLIGHTED
Broadly, the programme was well-structured. I was particularly pleased by the division of the classes into sections , with the objective of gaining knowledge of a wide range of vocabulary (collocations, phrasal verbs…)
Additionally, given the library was enormous I got to recommend books about literature and tourism.

RECOMMENDATIONS FOR THE FORESEEABLE FUTURE
To my mind, I was so occupied that time flashed by. However, it would have been icing on the cake of we had done more sightseeing. The programme could include a couple of guide tours for us to practice our listening while observing our surroundings. Given the chance and the choice, I would by all means travel with the agency again, even if this was not implemented.

I hope this report is feliciously phrased so that it will be taken into account for next year’s programme.

 

[emsr2d2]

What is the purpose of this piece of writing and what do you want us to do with it? You need to ask a question or make a request in your post.

 

[laluuuusii]

I was wondering if it could be revised broadly ( I saw other writings being corrected in the forum)

 

[emsr2d2]

I was wondering if it could be revised broadly ( I saw other writings being corrected in the forum)

Yes, we can do that but you need to make it clear in post #1 that that's what you want us to do. Start with something like "I wrote this piece [for practice/for an assignment]. I would be very grateful if you could correct any errors."

 

[jutfrank]

I'm pretty sure this is a CAE writing task. If it is, it will be very useful to some of us to be clear about that, as there are particular ways that these tasks are assessed.

 

[Tarheel]

You use unusual language, including words I rarely if ever see.

 

[tedmc]

You use unusual language, including words I rarely if ever see.

Yes, I have not seen the word "feliciously" either. Even "felicitous" is not common.

 

[5jj]

Yes, I have not seen the word "feliciously" either.

That's because it does not exist. It should be felicitously.

 

[Tarheel]

This report aims foremostly to asses my personal experience as a student being part of a programme.

Perhaps:

My goal is to discuss my experience as part of the programme.