Writing profile summary

[Yueehs]

Can someone please help to edit my profile summary?

Experienced and result-oriented office administrator with high organization skill seek position in Human Resource position. Proven abilities to handle complex tasks; viewed as a resourceful person. Able to work well with various people in different department.

 

[emsr2d2]

Before we continue, please use the Edit Post facility to enlarge the font in your post. It's almost impossible to read. While you're editing it, please remove the following:

1. Hi
2. Thanks.
3. Regards
4. HS

 

[Yueehs]

I have change the size and remove the unnecessary words.

 

[emsr2d2]

Can someone please help to edit my profile summary?

• Experienced and results-oriented office administrator with [STRIKE]high[/STRIKE] excellent organizational skills, seeking a position in Human Resources. [STRIKE]position.[/STRIKE]
• Proven abilities to handle complex tasks; viewed as a resourceful person.
• Able to work well with [STRIKE]various[/STRIKE] people in [STRIKE]different[/STRIKE] diverse departments.

See above. Don't put the sentences one after another like a paragraph. They should be laid out as bullet points. That's the only way that the reduced sentence construction can work.

I have changed the size and removed the unnecessary words.

Thank you. Please use the shorter format in future posts.