Writing Practice #3

AlexWoodz

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Could you please correct all the mistakes in my writing?
I've read a Wikipedia article about one of my favorite games that I've ever played.

Here's what I wrote down about Terraria.

What is Terraria?

Terraria is an adventure-sandbox game developed by Re-Logic and first realeased in 2011.

Terraria is one of the best-selling video games of all time with over 300 million copies sold.
Terraria has sold over 300 million copies, making it one of the best-selling video games of all time.

In Terraria, players can explore a variety of different procedurally generated worlds.

The freedom in this game is amazing, because you can do whatever you want, that's why some people usually call it "2d Minecraft" but it's not at all.

Players begin/start with basic tools, but as they progress through the game, they will need to upgrade their equipment in order to defeat all the bosses.

There are a tons of enemies, bosses, traps, etc. That can easily defeat any player, especially if they don't have the right equipment.

It doesn't matter how good you are at Terraria, eventually you will die.

Throughout the game there are a lot of NPC's that you can find that sells essential items that can be useful. (is writing "that" many times right?).
Throughout the game you'll find some useful NPC's that will help you progress through the game.

Once you have defeatead "Wall Of Flesh" boss, the hardmode begins.

Once the hardmode begins, everything in the world will suffer a terrible change, enemies will be stronger, it will be difficult to explore the world without getting hurt, getting new items will be a headache AND to top it all, if you are unlucky, bosses may spawn randomly without being prepared to fight.
 
Right at the beginning you said the same thing twice. You just did it in slightly different ways.

I didn't see a lot of errors. However, if you reread it you should be able to find a couple.

How would you describe it for somebody who has never heard of the game before?
 

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