Would it be possible to get some advice on my English Language coursework?

[mrcool_uk]

Hi guys,

I'm in my second year A2 English Language under the WJEC spec. I am currently doing a piece of coursework under 'Writing for a specific purpose', i chose to write an obituary for Amy Winehouse.

However, i'm really struggling this with this particular piece, particularly trying to analyse and find the features that are specifically aimed at the audience (middle-class, The Independent newspaper) and purpose (inform, create emotion) just seem to be really difficult. Is there anyway I could email someone a copy?

Thanks

 

[emsr2d2]

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

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[Rover_KE]

You're surely aware that 'I' is always capitalised, mr_cool.

 

[Tdol]

Why are you struggling? Tell me what she did and why I should care that she's dead- that's enough. And don't load it up with teenage slang that I don't know as a middle-class Indie reader.