shamsmayaleh
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this essay is for TOEFL IBT plz help me .. and what score should i get
some people show their emotions, while other people work hard to keep their emotions from showing. What are the advantages of each type of behavior? which do you try to do?
There are many situations we face in our daily life. People reactions for these situations differ from one to another, some show many emotions while others keep their emotions for themselves. For me, I would say I'm the kind of person that shows her feelings most of the time. However, I think each of the two behaviors have their own advantages.
First to talk about are the advantages of the showing emotions behavior, I think the person who show his/her feelings is very honest person ;therefore, lying would be very hard thing to do and this is the most important advantage I think. Another one is that people who always show their emotions feel very relaxed all the time and they have nothing to worry about. For instance, when I'm angry with my boyfriend, I talk about the problem with him and tell him what I really feel then we solve it easily and I will have nothing to think about later.
Although there are advantages of showing emotions, sometimes keeping them is necessary and has many benefits. I think people who keep their feeling are strong and this way will help them to get through bad things happened. For example, the situation of losing a friend or getting divorced, if you keep crying or telling everyone that you are sad, you will finally be a miserable person and you are never going to forget about it, then all you have to do is keeping your emotions from showing and act like nothing is happened.
As a result, I can say that life full of bad and good things and we should know how to deal with every situation. Sometimes it is important to show our emotions and other times is not.
some people show their emotions, while other people work hard to keep their emotions from showing. What are the advantages of each type of behavior? which do you try to do?
There are many situations we face in our daily life. People reactions for these situations differ from one to another, some show many emotions while others keep their emotions for themselves. For me, I would say I'm the kind of person that shows her feelings most of the time. However, I think each of the two behaviors have their own advantages.
First to talk about are the advantages of the showing emotions behavior, I think the person who show his/her feelings is very honest person ;therefore, lying would be very hard thing to do and this is the most important advantage I think. Another one is that people who always show their emotions feel very relaxed all the time and they have nothing to worry about. For instance, when I'm angry with my boyfriend, I talk about the problem with him and tell him what I really feel then we solve it easily and I will have nothing to think about later.
Although there are advantages of showing emotions, sometimes keeping them is necessary and has many benefits. I think people who keep their feeling are strong and this way will help them to get through bad things happened. For example, the situation of losing a friend or getting divorced, if you keep crying or telling everyone that you are sad, you will finally be a miserable person and you are never going to forget about it, then all you have to do is keeping your emotions from showing and act like nothing is happened.
As a result, I can say that life full of bad and good things and we should know how to deal with every situation. Sometimes it is important to show our emotions and other times is not.
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