[Grammar] woul you please correct these two quoets?

[Ever Student]

Hi,

"Be not in a hurry for giving punishment to a wrongdoer, but give some opportunity to him to apologize."

"Oh, my friend, three things are caustic and fatal: poverty after wealth, misery after glory, and loosing your friends."

Thanks in advance

 

[billmcd]

Hi,

"Be not in a hurry [STRIKE]for [/STRIKE]giving punishment [STRIKE]to a[/STRIKE] for [STRIKE]wrongdoer,[/STRIKE] wrongdoing but give [STRIKE]some [/STRIKE]opportunity [STRIKE]to him to apologize[/STRIKE] for apology."

"Oh, my friend, three things are caustic and fatal: poverty after wealth, misery after glory, and [STRIKE]loosing[/STRIKE]loss of [STRIKE]your[/STRIKE] friends (OR "loss of friendship" ) ."

Thanks in advance

b.

 

[Ever Student]

b.

Hi, thanks a bunch for editing.

I have a question for you:

For what reason have you eliminated "wrongdoer" and its reference?

 

[billmcd]

Hi, thanks a bunch for editing.

I have a question for you:

For what reason have you eliminated "wrongdoer" and its reference?

I would prefer to focus on the action rather than on the actor.