anhnha
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Obama delivered the verdict, which had previously been voiced by senior members of his national security staff, as he handed over his administration's latest classified report on the conduct of the war mandated by Congress.
More:AFP: No 'adjustments' needed on war fronts: Obama
Can I rewrite the sentence above as follows?
1. Obama delivered the verdict which had previously been voiced by senior members of his national security staff as he handed over his administration's latest classified report on the conduct of the war mandated by Congress.
(I have omitted commas before and after "which had previously been voiced by senior members of his national security staff".)
2. Obama delivered the verdict, voiced previously by senior members of his national security staff, as he handed over his administration's latest classified report on the conduct of the war mandated by Congress.
Are there other ways to express the phrase "which had previously been voiced by senior members of his national security staff" in the sentence above?
More:AFP: No 'adjustments' needed on war fronts: Obama
Can I rewrite the sentence above as follows?
1. Obama delivered the verdict which had previously been voiced by senior members of his national security staff as he handed over his administration's latest classified report on the conduct of the war mandated by Congress.
(I have omitted commas before and after "which had previously been voiced by senior members of his national security staff".)
2. Obama delivered the verdict, voiced previously by senior members of his national security staff, as he handed over his administration's latest classified report on the conduct of the war mandated by Congress.
Are there other ways to express the phrase "which had previously been voiced by senior members of his national security staff" in the sentence above?