[General] Where is where he finds them.

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holdenenglish

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Hi teachers

I've written the following introduction to an article. Could you please advise how I can edit the passage and make it it sound more natural to native speakers.

While corporate profit growth in India appears on track, stock prices have trailed. This has created attractive opportunities that investors can take advantage of. Here is where Anthony Bolton, Client Portfolio Manager, Asia Equity, finds them (URL: link to Anthony's article)

Cheers

Holden
 
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Sorry, the thread subject line has a typo, it should be: Here is where he finds them
 
Stock prices have lagged behind profits?
 
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