holdenenglish
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Hi teachers
I've written the following introduction to an article. Could you please advise how I can edit the passage and make it it sound more natural to native speakers.
While corporate profit growth in India appears on track, stock prices have trailed. This has created attractive opportunities that investors can take advantage of. Here is where Anthony Bolton, Client Portfolio Manager, Asia Equity, finds them (URL: link to Anthony's article)
Cheers
Holden
I've written the following introduction to an article. Could you please advise how I can edit the passage and make it it sound more natural to native speakers.
While corporate profit growth in India appears on track, stock prices have trailed. This has created attractive opportunities that investors can take advantage of. Here is where Anthony Bolton, Client Portfolio Manager, Asia Equity, finds them (URL: link to Anthony's article)
Cheers
Holden
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