[Grammar] When you have a text with a lot of concepts

[Nikitus]

Hello

Are the following paragraphs grammatically correct?

When you have a text with a lot of concepts, considering that you have bad memory, I suggest you first make a quick read, to have a first reading of the book. To memorize quickly the concepts, I recommend that you choose the most important concepts, then use the first letters of the four or five most important concepts and create a word you can remember.

Finally you should re-read and understand the concepts, underline the most important part. You should write a summary while studying. I will always be available to answer your questions. I want you read these photocopies, and put in to practice what we have discussed
a word you can remember.

Thanks

 

[Tarheel]

Hello

Are the following paragraphs grammatically correct?

When you have a text with a lot of concepts, considering that you have bad memory, I suggest you first make a quick read, to have a first reading of the book. To memorize quickly the concepts, I recommend that you choose the most important concepts, then use the first letters of the four or five most important concepts and create a word you can remember.

Finally you should re-read and understand the concepts, AND underline the most important part. You should write a summary while studying. I will always be available to answer your questions. I want you read these photocopies, and put in to practice what we have discussed.

Please note the changes.

 

[emsr2d2]

Tarheel, did you mean to make some changes to the first long paragraph. Several are necessary but you don't seem to have dealt with them.

 

[Tarheel]

Hello



When you have a text with a lot of concepts, considering that you have bad memory, I suggest you first make a quick read, to have a first reading of the book. To memorize quickly the concepts, I recommend that you choose the most important concepts, then use the first letters of the four or five most important concepts and create a word you can remember.

Perhaps:

When you have a text with a lot of concepts, scan through the book, taking note of the main points. Also, make an acronym of the main concepts to make it easier to remember them.