When Mark was young

[Bassim]

Have I made any mistakes?

When Mark was young he was easily irritated, which often resulted in him verbally and physically attacking people, but as he grew older, he learnt to hold his emotions in check. Sometimes, Mark would bump into people who threw insults at him, provoking him into a fight, but despite him boiling inside, he would remain as cool as a cucumber.

 

[teechar]

When Mark was young, he was easily irritated, which often resulted in him verbally and physically attacking people, but as he grew older, he learnt to hold his emotions in check. [STRIKE]Sometimes, Mark would bump into[/STRIKE] Even when people [STRIKE]who threw insults at him,[/STRIKE] tried provoking him into a fight, [STRIKE]but despite him boiling inside,[/STRIKE] he would remain as cool as a cucumber although he was boiling inside.

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