Bassim
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- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
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When George found out that his fiancée, Belinda, had been seeing another man all the time, he became disconsolate. He, who had been planning such a bright future with her, suddenly felt abandoned like a child at a fair. He confided to his friend, Robert, who told him he should think himself lucky instead. He never liked Belinda because of her shallowness and thought that George deserved a better wife. "Now you're free to do whatever you want, but imagine what a mass you would be in if you had children. She would have taken every single penny out you in child maintenance," Robert consoled him.
When George found out that his fiancée, Belinda, had been seeing another man all the time, he became disconsolate. He, who had been planning such a bright future with her, suddenly felt abandoned like a child at a fair. He confided to his friend, Robert, who told him he should think himself lucky instead. He never liked Belinda because of her shallowness and thought that George deserved a better wife. "Now you're free to do whatever you want, but imagine what a mass you would be in if you had children. She would have taken every single penny out you in child maintenance," Robert consoled him.