Well-made network infrastructure

[keannu]

[FONT=&#48148]Korean main industry/Korea's main industry/The main industry of Korea is IT business. Korea has the fastest internet speed in the world. Well-made network infrastructure has brought about many changes in the Korean life style.

1. Which is the best choice in the first underlined?
2. Is the second underlined part correct?[/FONT]

 

[emsr2d2]

1. I'd use "Korea's main industry". I'd remove "business".
2. You need an article at the beginning of the third sentence.

We usually refer to "internet speeds" - it is unlikely that everyone in the country gets the same speed. "lifestyle" is just one word.

 

[keannu]

1. I'd use "Korea's main industry". I'd remove "business".
2. You need an article at the beginning of the third sentence.

We usually refer to "internet speeds" - it is unlikely that everyone in the country gets the same speed. "lifestyle" is just one word.

For 1, when do you use A of B and B's A respectively?

 

[emsr2d2]

I'm never keen on "the XXX of XXX" when a standard possessive (apostrophe + s) will do. If you want to start with "the main industry", I'd follow it with "in Korea".

 

[Tarheel]

Korea's main industry is IT? It isn't cars? Or cellphones?