We uploaded the news about Z with the wrong photo

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Dear Z: We would like to ask for your help. Due to a mistake we made, we uploaded the news about X with the wrong photo. Is it possible for you to delete the link from your LinkedIN page and upload the following which contains the news with the correct photo?

Sincerely.


(I wrote the text).

Thanks.

 

[Tarheel]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Dear Z: We would like to ask for your help. Due to a mistake we made, we uploaded the news about X with the wrong photo. Is it possible for you to delete the link from your LinkedIN page and upload the following which contains the news with the correct photo?

Sincerely.


(I wrote the text).

[Deleted.]

It is perhaps overly wordy, but it is grammatically correct. (Very polite.)