[General] Visceral Illusion?

[billyb123]

So I'm writing a song titled titled "temporary fix," in this case relating to drugs, women, alcohol, etc.

Would "visceral illusion" be a legitimate metaphor to use? I'm looking for a lyric along these lines to rhyme with confusion. On the other hand, if you have any other terms/ideas (7 syllables give or take) that you think may work as a metaphor for a mind altering/escaping experience I'd be keen to read Thanks!

 

[ElizabethKing2015]

So you need a word to rhyme with whitch word? Confusion? You should check out RhymeZone. it's a website. Here are the choises they offered me:


4 syllables:
absolution, air pollution, andalusian, attribution, consolation, constitution, contribution, demolition, devolution, diminution, disillusioned, dissolution, distribution, elocution, evolution, execution, institution, invitation, lazy susan, lilliputian, noise pollution, persecution, postulation, prosecution, prostitution, resolution, restitution, retribution, revolution, substitution

5 syllables:
buffer solution, electrocution, french revolution, green revolution, heat of solution, joint resolution, redistribution, saline solution, solid solution, thrift institution, water pollution

6 syllables:
aqueous solution, counterrevolution, english revolution, mental institution, normal distribution, poisson distribution, russian revolution, stay of execution, writ of execution

7 syllables:
bernoulli distribution, emergent evolution, financial institution, frequency distribution, isotonic solution

 

[Raymott]

I'd call it a good enough metaphor. It's a song - you have a lot of poetic licence.

 

[Tdol]

It is your song, so use it if you like. It sounds fine to me.