Videogame review

[NamelessKing]

Please can you amend any grammar or collocation mistakes?

This game is visually stunning. I can't overstate how beautiful the environment and the overall atmosphere look. Developers combined all the remarkable parts of previous releases and created a spectacular game in the best DMC tradition. The tutorial is incredibly well done. Newbies will feel at home. There's even a "The Void" practice zone where you can go into whenever you learn a new move. This is particularly helpful if you wish to perfect it (you can even try out all the combos before you decide on the upgrade for your character, so it is accessible between missions and when you get upgrades). Said another way, you won't be prone to forget a huge list of combos. It's as incremental as you want it to be. If you're new to the series, you unlock new moves as you progress in the game. Even beginners will soon discover how to blend moves together. All these features render the game an absolute masterpiece.

Cheers.

 

[teechar]

[Strike]Please[/Strike] Can you [Strike]amend[/Strike] fix any grammar or collocation mistakes in my text please?



This game is visually stunning. I can't overstate how beautiful the environment and the overall atmosphere look. Developers have combined all the remarkable parts of previous releases and created a spectacular game in the best DMC tradition. The tutorial is incredibly well done. Newbies will feel at home. There's even a "The Void" practice zone [Strike]where[/Strike] you can go into whenever you learn a new move. This is particularly helpful if you wish to perfect it (you can even try out all the combos before you decide on the upgrade for your character, so it is accessible between missions and when you get upgrades). Said another way, you [Strike]won't be prone[/Strike] are unlikely to forget the huge list of available/possible combos. It's as incremental as you want it to be. If you're new to the series, you unlock new moves as you progress in the game. Even beginners will soon discover how to blend moves together. All these features render the game an absolute masterpiece.


Cheers.

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[NamelessKing]

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Is it wrong to say "amend mistakes/errors"?

 

[emsr2d2]

Yes. You don't want them to be amended - that would mean, theoretically, that we could change them to a different error. You want us to correct them.