Use works to make sentence

[Saraj Zhou]

Please help edit the sentences I wrote below.

I have resigned from the position of customer representative from the company.

Eddison applied for the position of Key Account Manager of Alibaba on Monday and he will get the interview result no later than Friday.

The band has sent the statement to my email and I have to pay the bill on time otherwise I have to pay interest.

Only one staff was dismissed this year for his working mistake.

Sarah was educated in America for her Master’s degree.

I am going to change my working schedule to the night shift.

The company is in the state of expanding and has been employed more than 200 staff this year.

It’s common to see employees working overtime in China.

Many retail recruit part-time workers during the busy season.

I will get three times my salary if I were asked to work during holidays.

 

[5jj]

Welcome to the forum Saraj Zhou.

We like to help when we can, but we don't help with homework assignments. Your teacher wants to see what you can do, not what we can do.

 

[emsr2d2]

Welcome to the forum.

Take more care when you write. Your title says "works" instead of "words".

 

[tedmc]

You should have at least number the sentences.
Look into 3 & 7 again.

 

[emsr2d2]

You should have at least numbered the your sentences. Look into at 3 & and 7 again.