immahdis
New member
- Joined
- Nov 14, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
could you please help me with my email to make it more formal? I am always awful at formal emails, and this one is very very important. Here is what I’ve written:
Dear Mr. XXXXXX,
My apologies for notifying you by email. Further to my conversation with Mr. XXXXX this morning, and his offer for a new position at XXXX, please accept this email message as notification that I am leaving my current position at the airport due to recent issues, and personal reasons. So I’d like to ask for a whole week off, effective from November 14, until November 21.
Thank you for your understanding of my decision to leave, and all your support over the past 9 months. I wish you all the best for your continued success.
Respectfully,
(My name)
Dear Mr. XXXXXX,
My apologies for notifying you by email. Further to my conversation with Mr. XXXXX this morning, and his offer for a new position at XXXX, please accept this email message as notification that I am leaving my current position at the airport due to recent issues, and personal reasons. So I’d like to ask for a whole week off, effective from November 14, until November 21.
Thank you for your understanding of my decision to leave, and all your support over the past 9 months. I wish you all the best for your continued success.
Respectfully,
(My name)
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