unproductive existence

[alpacinou]

Hello.

Does the combination of "unproductive existence" work?

What do you think about this sentence?

Aren't you tired of this unproductive existence you have? Don't you want to do something meaningful in your life?

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Hello.

Does the combination of "unproductive existence" work?

Yes.

What do you think about this sentence?

Aren't you tired of your unproductive existence [STRIKE]you have[/STRIKE]? Don't you want to do something meaningful with your life?

The phrase is fine. The changes make the sentence more natural.

Wanna is not a word unless your're the Beatles:

 

[alpacinou]

The phrase is fine. The changes make the sentence more natural.

Wanna is not a word unless your're the Beatles:

Thanks Charlie. I missed you.

I can't see this video you have posted. Actually, Youtube is blocked in my country. Sometimes VPN softwares work, but they have not worked for a few days.

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Thanks Charlie. I missed you.

I can't see this video you have posted. Actually, Youtube is blocked in my country. Sometimes VPN softwares work, but they have not worked for a few days.

It's the Beatles singing "I wanna hold your hand." (The song title is "I Want To Hold Your Hand.")